Algernon- Lane fetch me somemore champagne, two more bottles should do
Lane- Yes Sir
[Lane Enters hands the wine over to Algernon and Exits]
Algernon- Ah yes. Now, where was I, Jack how are things in the town
Jack- They are very good I visited Lord Shoreman and we dined
Lord Shoreman- Yes what an eventful day that was
Algernon- Where exactly was my invtitation to this oh so lovely get together
Jack- It was a spur of the moment type of thing
Algernon - Well I suppose that's alright then
Lord Shoreman-What time is it Lane?
[Lane Enters]
Lane: Sir it is quarter past seven
Jack: Oh goodness is the time well I shall be on my way. Thank you for having me. The sandwichs were
scrumptious
Good introduction of the characters and an understanding of their relationship
ReplyDeleteTo improve there should be more of an interaction between both characters so that the audience may become more aware of the topic.
www a agree with Louisa, the intro to the characters is sound but under-developed so that we are left wanting a lot more. I like Algy's petulance but he gives in too easily, he could have made them both suffer more for excluding him from their evening out.
ReplyDeleteebi you had managed to place the cigarette case in the drama in some way. developed more topics, found a convincing way of getting Jack to depart and maybe made it funnier...