Dear Diary,
I am to be married to Ernest Worthing, I will be Mrs Ernest Worthing. To be married to a man with a name that produces vibrations such as Ernest has always been my dream and it is about to come true. His name strikes utter confidence and that is who I'll be married to. However I am afraid that mama will question him to harshly and not accept the proposal, even so I will marry Ernest he is my soul mate. I am destined to be married to a man named Ernest, it was written in the stars.
He started the conversation with the weather, a topic which makes me nervous, I new this was not what he intended to talk about, of course I was right, I'm never wrong. he told me that he loved me and then I revealed my love for him as well. He stated that we must get married at once but he didn't propose to me. When he did i knew my life was complete.Although a strange thing occurred before Ernest proposed to me, he asked if I would still love him, if his name were Jack.
Jack, that name has very little music, and produces absolutely no vibrations. I know several Jack's who are all quit plain, I pity any woman who is married to a man called John for the only safe name is Ernest. A man whom i am marrying.
I Gwendolen Bracknell will become Mrs Ernest Worthing
www mostly well written and some clear references to your reading.
ReplyDeleteebi I think you need to be clearer about when the diary is written - presumably after they have left Algy's flat rather than while Lady B is interviewing Earnest. Also, be wary of making your emulation of the play too repetitive or too derivative. You need to show your undertsanding by the way you incorporate the lexical choices and the use of syntax or grammar but not by copying phrases verbatim.
Finally, be aware that Gwendolen's name is Fairfax not Bracknell - this is because of the way English titles work - Bracknell is a place and Lady B is the Lady of Bracknell, whereas their family name is Farifax.
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