Write the scene between Stanley and Stella as they had breakfast.
Stanley: You know i didn't mean it right?
Stella: What?
Stanley:When I hit you, I didn't mean to, I was drunk and ... please forgive me
Stella: I know Stanley and I forgive you, What do you think Blanche will say?
Stanley: Why do you care what she thinks?
Stella: Well it's just the way she reacted last night, I guess she must be terrified, I'll talk to her once she comes down and we can sort this out.
Stanley: You should. I don't want her in our personal life
Stella: I'm going back to bed, ok
Stanley: Ok, I'll go fix the radio
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ReplyDeletewww - good attempt at trying to get the personalities of the characters across, you really got into the shoes of Stanley specially with his views on Blanche.
ReplyDeleteebi - however, try to make the piece a little longer next time so the views and opinions of the characters are put into view clearly.